We are learning to write an opinion.
We read some books about the things a pigeon could get up to. Then we wrote our own opinion about it.
I think the pigeon should not have a walrus as a pet because it will be a mistake.
The walrus is not meant to be a pet because the walrus is too big for the pigeon.
The pigeon would not be able to feed it and bath it.Besides the walrus will eat the pigeon.
The walrus will be too smelly and naughty.
The pigeon would be scared of the walrus and the walrus wouldn’t be scared of the pigeon
The end
hey my name is gloria and I'm from wigram and I would like to comment on your interesting story, I really like it. why did you write it twice? I'm not trying to be rude or anything, it's just a note.
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